Example of Reviewer Feedback: Page Clarity and Usability

Take a moment to review the example student materials, then read the reviewer feedback submission below.

Example Student Materials

Students are answering questions on page 42 related to the story A Wrinkle in Time. Next to each of the four questions are large photos. The directions and questions are in small font, and the images take up over 75% of the page.

Reviewer Feedback Submission

The questions at the bottom of page 42 are important for student focus. The images take up most of the page and reduce readability. It would be more effective to increase the font size of the questions and include one relevant image. A single image that reflects the setting would better support the questions.

Writing Best Practices: Provide the most relevant information when describing locations.

This example highlights reviewer feedback focused on page clarity and usability. The reviewer notes that the images dominate the page, while the questions are small and not clearly connected to the visuals, which may confuse students. The reviewer’s feedback emphasizes improving student access by reducing the number of images, increasing font size, and including one relevant image tied to the setting. This is a strong example of clear, specific reviewer feedback focused on improvement.